Hey friends! Thanks for all your valuable comments. I am excited to report that my manuscript is in the hands of an editor! I’m sure there will be many updates, but your comments have helped me have something of more quality to show the editor.
As you read, I’m not really looking for grammar mistakes. The editor will do that. Try to answer to the following:
Do you suffer from Chronic Pain?
Can you relate to this set of devotions?
Do they make sense?
Does everything connect? (my dissonant Tone - Our counterpart - The Harmonious Chords)
Does the Psalm fit with the devotion? (better suggestion?)
Does the hymn fit with the devotion? (better suggestion?)
Thanks again for reading. Here’s the file.
Merry Christmas!
Mandy