BETA Readers - Week Two
In the Stillness
It’s November and I have another week of devotions for you to read for me.
Remember that I covet your honest responses. This is the very first draft and I am looking for suggestions to improve it. You won’t hurt my feelings. :)
I made improvements from your suggestions from week one. Thank you for some great ideas. I have added links in the endnotes to all lyrics and scriptures.
Some of these devotions might have two suggested hymns. Let me know which one you think fits best or suggest another. Hymns need to be in the public domain.
Here are some questions to consider answering:
Do you suffer from a Chronic Illness? Know someone who suffers from Chronic Illness?
Does each devotion make you want to read the next one?
Do you find yourself skimming rather than reading it through?
Are you confused at any point in the devotion? Do you have enough information? Too much information?
Does the devotion resonate with you? How?
Is it too long/ too short?
Do you find encouragement at the end of the devotion?
Did my story capture your attention? why or why not?
Did you notice any inconsistencies? Redudancy?
You have til the end of the month to review this for me.
Thanks Again for your help with this.
Mandy
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